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Obsession - Depression

Here I am just walking away,
'Cuz we both know there nothing to say.

If your think your know how I felt,
Then excuse yourself for the pain that your delt.

What do your mean, this is a surprise,
Did you ever expect I'd discover your lies.

And that it your Ultimately lead to your demise,
Now I bet your hoping I'd sympathise.

Now like before you have damaged me,
Like you've belted me in the gut with your knee.

You took control of me like I was your pet,
Now my emotions are stuck on pre-set.

So now I cant change the way I feel anymore,
Your destroyed my life you stupid Wh***.

My heart is broken my knees are weak,
Cant even muster the courage to speak.

So now I sit here wallowing in pain,
Replaying the moment again and again.

The day I saw another man with you,
Was like my heart being punctured with the heel of your shoe.

I hope you enjoy the rest of your days,
Remebering how you hurt me in all these ways.

Now my soul will enter the sky,
As this bullet enters my skull and I finally die,
                                                Goodbye

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Written May 24th, 2006

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  • Viva La Vie Boheme
    July 5, 2006
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    Love hurts, lies hurt, the truth hurts... why does everything have to hurt but I really feel your pain, the naughty word adds special effect but I felt th epain in it

  • Eulb kcalB
    May 24, 2006
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    we all have been there love , it hurts

    take care
    jamila

  • ELeMeNtAL TiDe
    May 24, 2006
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    Thanks for Sympathising with me it does help the pain...

  • Eulb kcalB
    May 24, 2006
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    very emotional this piece
    pain and hurt vibrates loudly here
    good job at getting these feelings across

    maybe she will never understnd the pain she caused you , maybe that day will never come
    but know this you have been released from bondage from loving someone who was very much unworthy of you

    PS my saying this may not lessen the pain but all in all it's true you know, be well


    blessings
    jamila yadira