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Aim To Heal

Love is a mutual process where misery is shared and conquered,
and truly one with such a beautiful soul could not be all misery
Surely there is light in that darkness, for I could see it well
enough to decide that such a soul was worth the effort of loyalty

And I see the paint of darkness covering what you cannot see
And instead of aiming to pull away, you should aim to heal
And I will help you as best as I can

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Written May 24th, 2006

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  • Rose Dark Thorn gold member
    May 24, 2006
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    I try when I think the person truly deserves it.

  • Princess Muse silver member
    May 24, 2006
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    This is very nice...It has a nice sweet warm fuzzy feeling to it when you read it...You are wise beyond your years my dear...and you have a heart of gold.

  • Rose Dark Thorn gold member
    May 24, 2006
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    Not anyone...people who deserve it.

  • Yunaleska gold member
    May 24, 2006
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    You're such a wonderful person and writer, Rose. YOu'd help anyone. *sigh* You're wonderful at it too. I'm trashy at comforting, as you know. Beautiful poem once again.