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Bid Hope To Stay

Dead in places, you may be
but don't you realize what I see?
The soul so poisoned in the dark
just needs something to light its spark
And that heart of gold within;
the one that's been withering
I see a place where it could thrive
and it just takes a few steps to arrive
to a place of harmony and happiness
for you to be free of your harness

I see a light within this soul
that the darkness has all but eaten whole
May that darkness set you free
for you to be what you were meant to be
So then I shall stand by your side
and you'll have no need to curl up and hide
For I see the purity within the dark,
and I see that hope has yet to embark
away from your desolate land of decay,
so I have a chance to bid it to stay

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Written May 24th, 2006

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  • Yunaleska gold member
    May 24, 2006
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    for you to be what your were meant to be

    um...you were meant to be? *blink*

    Other than that, wonderful write. Gods, I'm so jealous! You write such wonderful poetry and I can't.