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Let The Flame Shine Bright Through The Darkness

Though there is the darkness in a heart of gold,
there is darkness in all of us,
and the love that strongly envelopes your soul
clearly makes up for that

Never let the ebony black seep out
and enshroud you in the blinding cage
It keeps you from one so precious,
and that is unacceptable

A soul so beautiful despite the dark
deserves to shine upon such a spark
If you would let that light shine through,
I'm sure you will see the gift it holds for you

Never let the poison quench that flickering flame

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Written May 24th, 2006

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  • Yunaleska gold member
    May 24, 2006
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    Pretty pretty pretty! Lovely, beautiful write. And and and...mum's watching.

  • Rose Dark Thorn gold member
    May 24, 2006
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  • outlawtorn
    May 24, 2006
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    fear not fair rose, for the flame will go on burning through the miseries of the darkest nights of the soul it will rage on.
    burning into the horizons that shine in the distance.
    thank you.