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Magpie

Dear magpie
Do you know the fate that falls
With your solidarity?
Or is there something true about the tale?
Have you some way to know the future
Dear magpie?

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It's not finished.. it needs to be finished.. but I just haven't had the time.
Written May 24th, 2006

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  • ShahidKhan
    December 13, 2006

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    nice Loren, it is fine without being finished i like the way you used qusetions to mainly write the poem and they were the only punctuation used and the enjanment works great