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NEXT time you DARE!

I thought you were there
I thought you approved
And all I want is to know…

    ( How do you dare
      dare to be mean
C1<dare to lie and dare to scream?
      Because no we’ve seen,
    ( You two faced side
       and I can no longer abide

Because I love him and I won’t give up!
No matter what!
He’s my life and I am soon to be his wife!

And nothing, not even you
Can tear us apart
Our love is too strong
So go ahead and move right along
Because I love and that is the end…oh.. I love him!

I thought you loved us, and wanted us to work out
But now all you do is cuss and shout!
Being a bitch must be really hard,
Like playing spades with all the wrong cards!

But I think I know why
Because I love him and he loves me and now I see…
This is what you’ve always wanted…
A man like mine…
But here’s two words to shove up your ass…
“man” and “MINE!”

But that’s too bad and here’s why…

(C1)

so I guess I was wrong,
you really don’t care,
But NEXT time you DARE …
Your ass is mine!

Author notes

this is a song to this woman who tried to screw with my man!
Written May 24th, 2006

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  • Heather Kelley
    July 22, 2006
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    hahaha!

  • Wingless89
    June 2, 2006
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    Excellent

    I really liked this one when you showed it to me before, its very well written, your tone and the feel of your words gives me a clear idea of your emotions at the time, very descriptive. Very well done Lizzie.