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A Beautiful Soul Deserves A Loyal Friend

A love so grand and so true
deserves some loyalty just for you
I may be young, and far away,
but a friend is one I'd not betray

And even if so, we both know
that a tear in my seams would carry through
The love in my heart what bleed out then,
which only that friend could ever mend

Take this as my word to you
May you hold it tightly in your despair
A close friend may flourish from each verse
If so, it'll be one you'll not lose first

That would be your decision to make, not mine

Author notes

The poem says to him, what needs to be said, and that is all that truly matters.
Written May 24th, 2006

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  • Radio sirens4 Death
    August 6, 2006
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    Wow this is somthing that i can relaate to badly, I like this piece.
    Great Write

  • Rose Dark Thorn gold member
    May 24, 2006
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    You spelled it right.

  • Yunaleska gold member
    May 24, 2006
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    Another fabulous poem....I don't know how to spell 'fabulous'. *shrug* ANYway, wonderfully written poem again.

  • Rose Dark Thorn gold member
    May 24, 2006
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    You might have a hard time getting to know me though.

    Thank you for your comment.

  • Nanette
    May 24, 2006
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    Wow...what true words. I so resonate with these words...I always said that I would want a friend like me, hmm...but now, I would like a friend like you Well written!
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