love
pain
intelligence
three words
they describe him
interesting that i pick these
nothing else can i see
he loves he hurts
forever
there's nothing more for him
throughout all of this
he has intelligence
Author notes
Written May 24th, 2006
A contest entry
- Do you have what it takes by Improv Machinery.
400 points, ended July 5, 2007, 21 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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not bad, but not what im looking for in this contest, thanks you for the entry though. i like the style and everything and i would like to read more of your work. if you could please reply to my comment i will definitely read more of your work.
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good
nice poem. must I guess who its about? -
Great
Wow to this write.
Really.
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