My feelings are floating like a river
overflowing it's wide and firm shore,
feeding soul with a longing shivers,
verses are my life, not a poetical decor.
Pictures and infinite words of hot flame,
colors, smells, some inner secret vision,
many other things comes with no name,
making me to be poet, it's my own decision.
Everything come out from the deep inside
like a sudden traitor of my humble heart
sometimes I want some of my feelings to hide;
I may call it a wonder, some name it art.
I am just a poet, just because I am,
from a crumbled past, feelings, a collection,
to be what I am that's my nature condemn,
my heart is going in the right direction.
Don't ask me what the next I will explore,
it's all about muse, companion of my own,
it could be nature, love or stories from yore,
something new and maybe things unknown.
I must to write same way I have to breath,
poetry, companion of my life to my death.
Author notes
Option no. 1.
LHC
GT: allpoetry.com/Contest/2022121
Written May 24th, 2006
In a list
A contest entry
- Group Challenge- ITG Vs LHC by Raazi.
300 points, ended June 5, 2006, 10 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What did you think
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Thank you Amythest. It's never too late for good wishes and congratualtions.
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Congratulations
Merry meet,
Congratulations Sonja on winning the Gold. Please forgive my tardiness. This was a stiff competition. Congratulations again.
Amythest -
I am glad you like it and I am glad that my effort to express my own feelings are the same as yours. I really didn't expected any trophy and gold was a great surprise to me.
~Sonja~
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Sentiments well expressed in these lines - think we all feel the same, just wrote it in different ways. Congratulations on winning gold!
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Thank you Ankita. I was realy surprised with trophy, but I am happy that you found my poetry worth to read and to award my poetic effort.
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as a co-judge this was my top-favorite on the list....did a good job
Ankita
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Thanks you william for your time to read my poetry and for so nice comment.
~Sonja~ -
The last two lines summed up the whole essence of what poetry means to us. Wonderful write. william
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Thank you blondone for your always apprechiated comment.
~Sonja~ -
this is a really great write a great show of poetry well written and nicely formed...
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Thank you solarman for your time to read my poetry. I am glad you found it worth to read.
~Sonja~ -
Awesome! Beautiful!! Great choice of words!!! Wonderful!!!!
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Thank you Sondra. I do not have enough words to say thank you.
~Sonja~ -
beautiful and well Written
THIS WAS A REALLY GOOD POEM. IAM GLAD YO READ IT. I DIDNT HAVE ENOUGH APUSES TO DO THIS LAST NIGHT. SO HERE IAM THIS MORNNG. I LOVE YOUR WORK. THANK YOU FOR LETTING ME READIT MY SISTER -
I am glad Nermin that you see it the same way as I do, and like Kevin said, this is a tribute to all poets. Most of us have the same reason t be a poet, something inside, invisible force...
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Thank you Kevin.
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superb
sONJA, IT IS SO BEAUTIFUL DEAR, YES TRUE FEELINGS THAT YOU ARE HONEST ABOUT, WONDERFUL. and you know at the mention of water and rivers, AAAh that touches me so much, i love the beautiful imagery of nature you create.
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A MOST BEAUTIFUL TRIBUTE TO EVERY POET
A tribute to us all who write to express how we feel in our hearts and souls.
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thank you Linda because you are always here with your uplifting words.
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good poem within your write, nice flow of poetic words, thank you for sharing and good luck..Linda
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wowwww....so wonderful my dear friend.
Wish you the best luck in the contest.
Shahrzad
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This is just wonderful. It has a feeling of 'correctness' about it. It is written the way it should be written about the feeling and calling of a poet. Though unpretentious and stated in a factual way, the words are beautiful and enlightning. Very nice Sonja.
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