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i am nothing

i see nothing in the mirror
for there is nothing to see

i am nothing

there is nothing to see
nothing to feel

i am nothing

there is nothing to hear
nothing to care

i am nothing

yet why are you nothing
for you are something
you are not like me

i am nothing

you i can see
yet you cannot see me
i hide though i know ought from

i am nothing

i have to fear something
for i am nothing
why do you hold something to yourself
in fear you hide it

you need fear me not
for i am nothing. nothing.

i see what you hold so deat
but i do not understand
for i am nothing

i am nothing

i feel how it vibrates warmth
i see how it shines
i hear how it sings
but how
for i am nothing

i am nothing

you hold something so dear
it has given me something
but how can that be
for i am nothing

i am nothing

yet you have given me something
i see the tears that fall upon your blade
blade
why
what you dold so dear will be crushed
your life

for i am something
i am your life
and i am precious

i am something

not nothing
not just plane anything
i am something

life


Author notes

i hope that you enjoy it
my friend asked for some poetry so i gave her some
Written May 23rd, 2006

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  • chaosfactor79171
    May 24, 2006
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    This has alot of passion in it. I can see why you desided you wanted to join allpoetry this is a very good site and I hope you find alot of friends in this site. What kind of poetry do you mainly like to write?? I can tell you do seem to like to write depressing poetry by the looks of this poem. And that you have been a member since yesterday?? I liked your poem though it was very passionate and did bring your point across letting the reader feel and know how you feel. This was a lovely poem. Keep them coming. Soon you will have more readers to your page. Good job and keep them coming. -Juarez