False, a lie
It cannot be
What you are in front of me
You look like me, in so many ways
But the difference never ceases to amaze
Those claws
Those ears
More flaws?
No tears
Your eyes
So easily seen
I got rid of you
You must be a machine
You kill
You maim
We seem to be
Almost the same
My demon
My demon
You should be tame
How are are you here
Facing me
Whoever was it
That set you free?
Because you see
After I am done with you
I am going to go
And get them too
You may be stronger
Faster and mean
I could be crueler
Than I seem
My demon
My demon
I know that gleam
You are planning how to kill
You do not realize
That I have had my fill
Of all these people using my "strengths"
And trying to make me nice and weak
I will not have it
Anywhere near me
OK I am weird
I understand
I am talking to
My own right hand
My demon
My demon
You are about to be buried
Into this man
Who is you
And we are not really two
Author notes
NO... bad piece
Written May 23rd, 2006
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WOW!!! such a powerful piece....love the repetition
KoP
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wow this is a very good poem. i realy like the feeling cause i have a twin and this made me think of her.
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well done my mate
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This is awesome... It's not bad at all!!! You did a great job on this!!! Keep up the great work hun!!!!!!!!!!!
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Rockinawesome
wow Jared...i know what you are talking about and i really do miss you ALOT!!! Please call me sometime or i will call you friday night...I Love you
Love,Cassie
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interesting. lol very unique piece here. good job.
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