She said that men
who make her laugh
also make her hot
but she would marry
only a man who could
stop her hunger
so I sat anonymous
amid the bride's family--
the worst man
at her wedding
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Written March 11th, 2003
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wonderful
i love this, i really think i got it, it's so sad, it hits on that painful feeling that everyone knows, being perfect for someone and not being chosen. i think that the fact that you didn't waste words really adds to the effect of the poem, you didn't over explain it, and so it forces people to think about it. i think it's gorgeous
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.....? i dont quite catch the meaning of the poem but *shrug* its a good write none the les. quite interesting, ill give it that. its a great eye catcher, and it keeps your attention. short and sweet. good job
*~!)o(Azul Corte Katze)o(!~*
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