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Help Me

Give me that extra push
Give me that motivation
Give me all that I desperately need
Give me what you can

i shall always be grateful to you
i shall never leave your side.  
i will be loyal and compassionate
i will do the best for you.

Just help me now.
My life is blurred
Pain and confusion fog my thoughts
For once you give me life
I'll be back.
you'll never have to worry.

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Written May 22nd, 2006

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  • am am
    April 13, 2007

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    wow this is a great poem. it really moved me. keep up the great writing. it will get better sooner or later. keep writing. peace and love am am


  • RushofBlood666
    December 20, 2006
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    I know you have not been on here for a while, and i do hope that everything is okay, you have a beautiful write here and i know what you are feeling, every bit of it, and it is very hard and painful to go through, but you can make it, you really can.


  • HeWillAlwaysBeAFool
    May 24, 2006
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    I like this. But beacuse someone saves you does not mean that you have to give yourself to someone.
    Talk to you later! Miss talking to you!
    ~Sarah