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My love my heart my everything

TO SEE YOU IN PAIN IS A THOUSAND DEATHS TO ME
TO SEE YOU CRY BRINGS A FLOOD TO MY EYES
TO SEE YOU ANGRY FILLS ME WITH RAGE
TO SEE YOU CONFUSED MAKES ME LOST
MY HEART BLEEDS AT THE TINIEST BIT OF NEGATIVITY
I WANT TO TAKE ALL YOUR PAIN
I CAN ONLY WISH TO HELP YOU HALF AS MUCH AS YOU'VE HELPED ME
TO BE YOUR BACKBONE YOUR SUPPORT SYSTEM
TO GIVE YOU THE STRENGTH AND COURAGE TO GO ON
YOU ARE MY HEART, MY HAPPINESS, AND MY WORLD
I LOVE YOU

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Written June 11th, 2001

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  • Shenanigans
    December 3, 2007
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    Really meaningful. I would question the capitals, but profound nonetheless. Good luck!