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The Break Of Dawn

At the Break of Dawn the dew
settles on our arms.
Sleeping by your side all night
long under the shimmering sky.

2 Hearts, 2 Souls, 2 Spirits
loving each other under the
Moon lit sky.

Now it is the Break Of Dawn and
the Sun is rising.
I DON'T want this moment to end
just yet.

You hold Me close into your arms.
As we watch God create a new day
before our Eyes.

Another day that We have to go
our separate ways.

BUT.......

When Night falls I will be back in your
arms.

We will stay here together until
The Break Of Dawn.

Yvonne J. Griffin
03/11/03

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hmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm :)

Written March 11th, 2003

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  • ReignInMe
    March 24, 2004
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    Wow, I love this one It makes me feel like I want to be there, like I can see it in my mind. The way it feels to be in someone's arms, warm, safe and loved, ahh one of the best feelings in the world
    ~ReignInMe~

  • PoetryGirl26
    March 26, 2003
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    SWeet write!


  • Rubee
    March 11, 2003
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    what a wonderful thought, to be in the arms of a loved one, ending each day and bringing in a new one together..nothing could be better...wonderfully written!!!


  • Jersene gold member
    March 11, 2003
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    This is a beautiful love poem. Sigh! Nicely penned!

  • -Dawn-
    March 11, 2003
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    Now this is beautiful Yvonne I just love the Dawn and I always make a point to read a poem with my name in it

    This is a really lovely visual you painted here just lovely

    Wonderful work as always

    ~~Dawn

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