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You are my Evening Star


My Love,

Many tears I have spilt since the day we first met. Much laughter and love have I always shed. If I recall, when we were young in years, I remember that you fell and stumbled because you saw me looking your way. I thought it was funny, but you mistaken me for laughing at you, when then you knew too, it was all we could do. I remember being afraid the first day we sat beside each other, afraid to be a fool, afraid to be myself, instead I became like you. Which was such a graceful mistake because God already knew, we was meant for each other like one and two. I remember you telling me a few times before that you couldn't keep your dogs and I was ready to go and build a protesting board.

You have pulled me threw, from beginning to end. Its hard to live without you, because you are part of the within. You are my sun when I arise in the morning and in the night your eyes are my stars and your tender laugh brightens my heart.

Threw all the times and trouble not once have we yelled or fussed, because we both agree that life is to short to forget to believe. Because we both believe in only the must.

Our love is yet rare, because on this night we wed. You gave me wings, and made me fly. Something that never existed until you told me we loved and I cried. When I was sick and my features were utterly bad, you took me in your arms and held on all night til I was better again. My debt to you is endlessly paid, because I love you always and forever it will stay.

And in the future, when our limbs and wrinkly faces grow on, our love will continue to sprout, like a beautiful rose. I love you and nothing you can say or do, will change the fact that I love only you.

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Written May 22nd, 2006

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  • WolfHeart
    June 7, 2006
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    nicely done

    So devoted. You put a lot of passion in this work. `As an old lady I can tell you age does not detract from our attraction. Somehow we don't notice the flaws or wrinkles because we have learned to love the person inside. I like this. hugs WolfHeart


  • Hope2MakeIt
    May 23, 2006
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    this is so awesomely touching. really. and refreshing to see a love like this. thank you for sharing this with me and i hope and pray that everything continues to go this well for you. hope2makeit

  • jkh
    May 22, 2006
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    Thank you for the well wishes. This poem is good. I can see how this might be said at the alter. Great flow and great feeling.


  • Tweedle Dee
    May 22, 2006
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    This is just what I would immagine. I tried with what I would think of, Im sorry if its a bit off. I've never wrote anything like this before. Wonderful contest though, and Congratulations on your engagement, many blessings, I hope it comes out to its best.