We will not back down
Oh, I'm going to hell?
Ha Ha Ha..Well, isn't that funny
You're condemning me again
So who are you to judge? (fuck you)
you call us crazy
but who confides into thin air expecting it to solve all your problems
while your kids are molested by the false prophets you worship
being forced to conform
"boy, you better choke on your words, or the devil will have your soul"
and you call us crazy(fuck you)
We will not bow down
so now I'm evil...
I say " fuck..shit ...god damn"
OH MY GOD![sarcasm]
i didn't burst into flames
Well, go figure!
so make up excuses to explain all your bullshit
I'll sit and stare and listen
and laugh in your face when you're done
at least I've got manners!
you call us crazy
Who watches countries crumble at their feet?
No one cares about the starving children
forgotten by the hypocritical
forsaken by the "holy"
forced to kill
forced to steal because you want to chase a cross
just one more penny in your wallet...
and you call us crazy(fuck you)
We will not quit
Yeah, you're what atheism builds on..
So I thank you,
but I must say,
that you're the fucking anti-Christ
Author notes
this is pretty much a bible/religeon bashing poem about hypocites and just plain idiot people..
Written May 22nd, 2006
A contest entry
- Swirl this Raspberry. by sweetpearl.
300 points, ended June 1, 2006, 8 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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ha ha, well, i don't think the author's comments were necessary! Very scathing, and i liked the not so subtle implementation of "Fuck you". Great. From one non-religious person to another, I approve.
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haha i agree...thank you for the comment!
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"forsaken by the "holy"
forced to kill
forced to steal because you want to chase a cross
just one more penny in your wallet...
and you call us crazy(fuck you)"
--forced to steal, eh? Haha. I think if you take a Christian and an Atheist - make them do the same crime - the Christian will believe the Atheist is wrong but not the self. You know what I'm saying?
Good job and good luck in my contest.
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