Whenever I see those beautiful mounds
My heart aches, I feel the warmth surge
Be it small, be it medium, be it big, who cares?
But lactating, I would say no, is for the babies
Too sacred even to whisper in the dark
Would close my eyes and pray for the mom
Plastic get up? Oops, not for me, no baby doll
Some may go for it but me, I am too choosey
Don't like the smell I think or is it the roughness?
Formed? What is that supposed to mean, I wonder
Beautiful shape or well nourished but too stale
Beyond me, don't get the idea, so forget it
Pointed? Why girlie all those beauties are pointed
The lovely teats make them look pointed anyways
All one needs is a perfect cup, no matter the size
Natural? Hah, here is something I got to muse upon
A round globe of medium size, perfectly shaped
Capped with the beautiful teat, that stands erect
Never did realize these beauties have so much
Different sizes, different shapes and what nots
I am amazed but how do I figure them out anyway?
What really matters is the perfect fit for my palm
Too big? How will I hold them as I would love to?
And how will I take them in my mouth, all of them?
The the best for me is what I can hold in my palm
Soft, yet firm when I hold it, with the teat hard as a nut
Sagging or wagging, no problem at all baby doll
Whatever she has got, yeah, the one who is all mine
Would be perfect for me, and I won't complain
As long as it is mine to love, knead and play with!!!
Copyright © 05/22/2006
Author notes
Haven' seen too many myself and not familiar with all those different sizes and shapes either. However I think we all love the ones our loved one has, no matter what shape or size it is.
Written May 22nd, 2006
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Okay, 1st I much say this is not what I was expect. lol It wis well written and I had to laugh from time to time. Definetly not a normal subject write.
I love that you state that what ever size or shape your loved on has is perfect in your eyes. Such a compliment to her and your feelings for her.
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Read most of your work on here and will come back to place my comments
This style of writing is not a preference of mine
however it was well done, sometimes I lost the momentum of this work because
I couldn’t follow the wording
However you show good style and your sense of imagery is very good
Wonderful work here
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beautifully written
Very eloquent style of composing such a lovely piece about breast. They are sometimes a big topic, and yet the small ones to can raise a few brows, you remin me of my other half.
well written, write ON!....ennovy
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All I have to say is Bravo.
You are a realist. I like that. And that makes your loved one standing beside you, with whichever breasts she has, a lucky woman.
Good luck in the contest
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This is a great piece, well done.
Thank you for entering my contest and good luck in it!
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