take a seat for a while
and give me time to explain
all of the many things
that've been causing my pain
my grievence is brief
yet still cuts to the heart
or the heart of another
who's has been torn apart
life is only the beginning
and death is nearly the start
i keep saying under my breath
as they take out her heart
holding back tears
and recieving their hugs
they know that i'm hurting
but i'd rather them not
i'm not repulsed by the least
from their small gesture
i'd just rather deal on my own
and control the situation
waiting and wondering
i hear people snicker
if only i could scream
but instead i whisper
whisper somthing profound
maybe i was too blunt
will she have to take the blame
for my unorthodox stunt
oh please lord don't take her
i am so very sorry
i never did mean it
i'll treat her better i promise
Author notes
Written May 22nd, 2006
A contest entry
- Personal Situations and Unique \ by AutumnEmotion.
300 points, ended June 9, 2006, 29 entries
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You sound like your in a desperate state of mass hurting..i like it.
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so
this is you hypothetically blaming yourself for your moms surgery...
right?
i like it.
props, nigga.
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