White clouds come and go
Space and sky stay as they are
A boundless fragrance
Author notes
Written May 22nd, 2006
In a list
A contest entry
- Haiku Contest (Results being corrected-- This contest is closed. ) by Dreamy Green Eyes.
300 points, ended May 27, 2006, 38 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What did you think
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thank you very much, ecrivain, for your comment. you speak in french, i reply in english, so we inverse our mothertongues
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C'est un bon haiku. Vous l'avez fabrique bien, et je dois dire que votre anglais est mieux que le francais que j'ecris.
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thank you very much, ellis. in unity.
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Motion means change
Change in space
Motion within structure
In and outside of the mind -
thank you very much, debi, for your kind welcome. it is the first time i try to express feelings under such a form. it is beautiful, because it forces going directly to the right point! no way to escape.
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Nice job!
White clouds come and go
Space and sky stay as they are
A boundless fragrance
You have used some beautiful imagery in this wonderful haiku! Great job! Thanks for sharing your wonderful talent! Best wishes in the contest!
Debi
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