Silence,
shadows whisper,
wind-kissed innocent leaves,
hummed the symphonies of diamonds,
night life seemed so alive,
midnight beauty,
silence.
DancingRed. 220506
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I love night time.
This poem was written for the contest 'Forms for You. Open Contest for Cinaquin or Rictameter' by His Bride and it won silver - allpoetry.com/Contest/2018432. My poem is in the Rictameter form.
Written May 22nd, 2006
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Thank you Marion! I really do love night time
Thanks a million for reading and leaving an understanding comment.
Take care,
DancingRed.
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dear darkened red,
your poem is a real jewel, revealing the treasure found in listening to the magical silence of the night, reflecting the deep silence within our own heart.
marion -
again.. very beautiful.
perfect form.. a diamond as well
beautifully expressed
jess -
hey! I know this fom! Actually, it is wondeful form...
I really liked the way you have began and fond of your discription of the alive night life. beilive or not, it seems your words have really amde the night's heart pump again and the soul is once more dedicated to the very body.
Your first three expression were great, as we call Sone par sohaga (in my home language) -
Thank you. Have fun with your contest!
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Very nice images and perfect form. THis contest is going to be hard to judge. Thank you for your entry. I will write more then I judge.
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