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touching

someone held my hand tonight
and it felt different
someone holding me
that was not you
like a sin
of warmth and comfort
you forgot that
to hold my hand when i was scared
but in the car
it was always there
your hand
your promise
your love
now i have nothing
no one to eat my tomatoes
or hold me at night
to format my computer
and everything is unfinished
even us?
one disaster that hit me so tragically
so beautifully
and it shattered my very being
and i can't find the pieces
or the tape
so perhaps i will forever be broken

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Written May 22nd, 2006

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  • Demosthenes
    May 31, 2006
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    Beautiful

    Wow... that is amazing, bro... AMAZING! You are such a good writer! Miss ya man! Hope things are going... okay. *gathers up pieces of your heart* Here you go!