DewOrNot2Dew, is that a question?
If so it needs correction.
The is no 'Or Not to Dew'
There's just Dew, for me for you.
If you question Dew, or dont believe,
It ends there, but you will see.
WE follow Dew for all the years,
Our past, present, and future cheers!
We will die, Dew will go on,
Its legacy forever strong.
Forever into eternity,
Dew will go, you will see.
There in heaven in the end,
Dew will be there in God's hand.
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#3
Written May 21st, 2006
A contest entry
- Username Contest by Alexandra Saint.
300 points, ended May 31, 2006, 16 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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The last line is lovely. I can imagine dew resting there, even while keeping God formless and faceless and everywhere.
And I love how you incorporated Shakespeare (is it Hamlet?) into your username and into the poem. This is a very lovely poem all in all, and you used a very fitting background. ^^
Kudos, and good luck!
Bekca.
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