on goes this fight
between darkness and light
some will succumb
i stand to overcome
yet I'll take the dark in
so that it will fall,and i will win
yet i don't know what I'll be
when the dark finally overcomes me
i am the creature of the moon
between dark and light i loom
kill you i finally will do
but i will die,because i am you
Author notes
Written May 21st, 2006
A contest entry
- The Thunder and the Lightening by Star Shine.
500 points, ended November 13, 2006, 23 entries
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Wow, very creative, lots of power in those short slear verses, I lilke the concept of taking in the dark to overcome it. Thanks for entering.
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that was great i mean the ending rocked cause i didnt guess it would be ones of those turn-arounds...so i enjoyed it...keep writing things like this cause its awesome!! good luck!
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wow, i know how you feel, great write, keep up the good work!
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