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Like you.

Your words replay
In my confused young head
Just like the words
That make up my favorite songs
And there's no telling
What words will play next
Your words, your actions
Like my iPod on shuffle
Unexpected, uncontrollable
Like you.



^ this feels unfinished, is there something i should add to it?

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Hm, It feels unfinished.
Written May 21st, 2006

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  • captaincrazy
    May 21, 2006
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    this is pretty good. i think you could add a little more though. that would make it a little better. but i did like it.