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I love him.

I love him so
But he doesn't know
He stole my heart
If I steal his,
Will I be the murderer?
If everything happens
For a reason, then why
Is love happening to me?
I should let it be
But he is making it
Awfully hard
Because I am falling for him
Like a raindrop, during a storm
... His stupid umbrella is in the way

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Written May 21st, 2006

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