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My Spotlight

blended with the crowd
noone seems to notice me
until I'm with you

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I wrote this before my bf broke up with me, he was my spotlight, or so I called him....

much luv~
shadowed
Written May 21st, 2006

A contest entry

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  • Lonly Dragon
    August 5, 2006
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    um. okay its good. i dont like haiku's i just hate them. but this one is okay.


  • GreenKat92
    July 29, 2006
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    thankyou!!! Glad to open your eyes to haiku a bit!!!

    much luv~
    shadowed

  • justlikeamatch
    July 29, 2006
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    i like it even though i usually think haiku's suck. anyway i can relate to it


  • Dreamy Green Eyes
    May 21, 2006
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    Great haiku!

    blended with the crowd
    noone seems to notice me
    until I'm with you

    This is a very sad haiku... Great use of emotion... Written in simple language, but very powerful! Thanks for sharing your wonderful talent! Best wishes in the contest! Debi


  • Inuyasha
    May 21, 2006
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    oh... pretty...

    Inuyasha

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