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A Ghost of All That Was

Where did all those days go?
the days full of laughter and smiles
with no worries and just delights?

now all that's left
is sobs and tears
and a pile of dreams and desires
in the trash

the memories haunt
as i continue on
trying not to look back
afraid to see the ghosts of all that was.

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Written May 21st, 2006

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  • Spookshow Baby
    May 21, 2006
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    awesome write. I can completely relate, it sux when u realize uve lost everything u ever wanted to be. "and a pile of dreams and desires
    in the trash"
    these were my favorite lines