Moreso than most,
A gentile and silenced soul, a
Rarity among the major league.
Youthfully spirited, yet eternally
Jaded and forlorn... the
Acquisition of motion
Never fails to
Emanate the purity of the mind.
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Mary-Jane 21/5/06 @ 16:38
Written May 21st, 2006
A contest entry
- Username Contest by Alexandra Saint.
300 points, ended May 31, 2006, 16 entries
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I love the description in this. It seems so, well, forlorn in and of itself. I really love how you used such descriptive words, like 'jaded', 'forlorn', 'purity', 'gentile', etc. I also like how you threw in 'major league': it places you in a realm most people don't know, and it enhances you.
Kudos, and good luck!
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