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currently untitled

I am calling
voiceless
Hoarse whispers
Silent screams

I am crying
tearless
Lidless eyes
bear witness

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Written May 21st, 2006

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  • Zora.
    May 21

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    Oh..

    So short, but so... effective. I adore this poem. Very evocative, and painful, and... it's... very, very good. And so simple... I really like this.


  • Elminster
    March 12, 2007
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    Rebirth

    Hey, How are You. Hope everything is well.

    love ash.


  • duana
    February 9, 2007

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    sounds like a poem I would write. How have you been? I just spoke to Erin the other day, and thought about you too!

  • pozo
    October 1, 2006
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    Good poem which flowed well. I liked the short lines here. To be honest, when I read the title I thought ‘I’ll give it a go but I don’t think it’ll be good because it’s untitled’- just a prejudice which tends to be true which I have. But you’ve proved me wrong with this great poem. I found it very powerful. Keep writing, this was quite a dark poem
    All the best
    Pozo


  • Elfin
    June 5, 2006
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    Awwwwwwww Sis what brought on such a sad piece of poetry, although the poem is sad and lovely, I hope these are not your true feelings . Val Sorry, just give Erin my last applause.

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