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The Clouds Colors

Clouds colors,
Yellow, blue and gray,
Beautify the sky

Author notes

The clouds color is not white, look deeply!
Written May 21st, 2006

A contest entry

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  • LonesomeAngel
    May 21, 2006
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    lovely

    thanks for sharing this beautiful haiku with us all. it is a wonderful piece of work. keep up he awesome work and keep on penning out these little pieces of art.


  • Dreamy Green Eyes
    May 21, 2006
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    Good job!

    Clouds colors,
    Yellow, blue and gray,
    Beautify the sky

    Good job! This is a nice haiku! Thanks for sharing your wonderful talent! Best wishes in the contest! Debi


  • Sorrows Redemption
    May 21, 2006
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    This is really good! I suck at haikus, but I'm glad you don't! LOL THis is awesome Sis I love how you used colors in it.
    Best of luck to you in this contest!

    ~Julianna~


  • Miss Vertige
    May 21, 2006
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    This is beautiful!!! It got my blood pumping, and senses hightened.
    Good luck in the contest, babe.
    Peace xoxox