By knowing the unknown,
My mind rests in infinity.
By knowing the unknown,
My body dissolves in wholeness.
By knowing the unknown,
The outside is inside.
By knowing the unknown,
The fear fades.
By knowing the unknown,
The future is a ghost.
By knowing the unknown,
The past is a corpse.
By knowing the unknown,
I am that I am.
Janaka says:
Who is the knower of the unknown?
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Written May 21st, 2006
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A contest entry
- The Ode Contest(PLEASE Click Wisely) by Raazi.
400 points, ended May 28, 2006, 8 entries
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thank you, udit, for reminding me the tendency of my personnality to emphasize the formless and neglect the form. it should appear in my writings, as you sound remark it. i will see, in a later step, if i can better balance the form and formless, in my life and expressions of life.
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As I said, very beautiful....but a bit too abstract. And it would be MUCH better if you could make longer verses out of it.
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thank you very much also, udit, to have offered such a creative topic of contest.
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yes! This is something I wanted to read! Very similar to what I have been looking for! Great job!
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thank you again, ellis!
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Excellent Writing
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thank you, bubble-licious, for your encouragement! yes, it is annoying. yes, slowness is boring, but boring is learning. with love.
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I liked this... In agreement with Darkenedauras, it was rather annoying, however it is insightful and very creative.
Buena swerte! -
thank you, darkenedauras. i appreciate your feedback. yes, repetition might sound annoying. but i need it for reminding what i say!
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thank you, contest bank, for your message and kind appreciation!
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Wow that was annoying but great question at the end there I have a few poems too that say the same line over and over but I guess it is needed to make the poem seem....right. Great job with the oxymorons and good luck in the contest
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this is quite a remarkable write
I really liked your stanzas in middle. That shows your creativity and expresses your true expression with quite an ease.
Thanks for entering and penning it so magically
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