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Too Late

The glitters turned dirty,
You're hearts not pure.
The wings are broken,
And there is no cure.

Sympathy lies,
Support breaks,
Silence cries,
And love aches.

Take a stab in the dark,
You're heart has shattered the dreams apart.
Take my word love doesn't exist,
The dreams are worthless of ones first kiss.

The souls turned dark,
You've turned cold.
You're on your own now,
The story's foretold.

Cinderella's divorced,
Fairy tales aren't real.
Don't open your heart,
'Cause these scars don't heal.

Take a stab in the dark,
You're heart has shattered the dreams apart.
Take my word love doesn't exist,
The dreams are worthless of ones first kiss.

Sympathy lies,
Support breaks,
Silence cries,
And love aches.

Breathe in the hate,
Escape the heart.
But now its too late,
You're torn apart.

Take a stab in the dark,
You're heart has shattered the dreams apart...

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Written May 20th, 2006

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  • phsycoawesomeness
    May 20, 2006
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    tis awesomeness

    even though i say that love is perfect and everlasting and true, i still like this, which to me seems hypocritical, buy anyways, keep on working on it, finish the song, it seems like it would be excellent, and awesomeness