I Have
The wetness of your lips
Some thousands miles--trace across me
Creation looking on- this love of ours
Out our breath
We trail on touches of eternity
Lost in hungry gazes
Among the many clinging needs of hunger
My holiday shall never stop with out you
Clouds are carved and sway
Unable to block our sun
Us a
An even sum
Square root of 312
Us tenderly wrapped around on and other
You and half a single
Onyx stone around you neck
Held fast in my eyes
Your beauty unfolds for me
My residence within
A fashion less delight
A fashion less delight
In which I'm lost in you
Held the heavenly fame
With this new feeling you planted in me
I almost dare not finish
For the sake of loss to come
Undone
Before me
Stands the goddess, the monarch,
Stands the compass
Which guides me forward
Into this new found love
A guest in the house that which is the art to me
This joy
This hope
Stirred within me
Your conversation
Spins endlessly in my ears
Words of erotic pleasure
A heart from the North evoked it
These touches of love
Unopened, rare, upon my own
My love is bared for you
The only gift
For you
I have.
Steven Mels
Author notes
to the one who has touched me so.
Written May 20th, 2006
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bloody beautiful
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WONDERFUL OUT POURING OF YOUR HEART
A wonderful out pouring of your heart my friend, your words are so loving and beautiful.
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WONDERFUL WRITE
This sounds a little different from you, your words seem a little more critical than usual.
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Awesome, Steven - simply awesome! I just love it when you write poetry like this. You have a real talent for the free verse love poem, my friend. Everything you write is not only lovely word, but smoothly flowing rhythm - kind of like a gentle breeze. And what better rhythm for a love poem? Oooh! It's like lying on a beach and having the waves break over me. Excellent write! Best - Toni
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I am sorry to say I didn't like it. I tried to find something good to comment about it but I just didn't like it. Some of the words didn't seem to be in the right tense and when you used you instead of you're, I mean maybe it was intentional but I just did fell it. Sorry.
God Bless
Tammy -
I'm sure she'll love it a lot.
Shahrzad
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Beautifully written!!!!! :F
Steven:
Son, I am so happy to be reading such awesome poetry from you, no more gloom, no more sadness in your writing, I thank God for this......
I hope to see more and more of this "NEW" you!
You are happy and it shows, thus making this old Mom of yours as happy as can be, for this is all she wants for her son!
Be blessed by love, light and guidance from the most high.....
I love you my gorgeous son.....
As lways with lots of love,
MoM 
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always cease to amaze me with your writes, this was a very well done write. thanks for sharing this and keep up the awesome poetry...
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well thank you.i am glad you liked it. thank you sorry ..lol wrong poem..lol sorry just got up..lol
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wow, this is a touchingly sweet poem!!
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very nice happy poem to say the least, keep penning and best wishes..
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awesome
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wow, this is nice, you did a great job on this right here, i mean wow, keep it flowing and golden
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LionessK thank you much . i hope so (the rose that is) thank you for the read and the commenet.
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very sweet.. good to see this from you..
a rose without the thorns
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Ahtemu hehehhehe....
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Wandering Angel thank you much sis. for everything.
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you wil have to continue to read to find that out.. hehhehehhe
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Steven, this is just awesomely beautiful hon! Good to see you happy again! Love you loads, Sandy
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Ahtemu thank you much. it feels good to write like this again it has been awhile since i have. thank you hun for reading and commenting on my words .
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AbusedFlower thank you much i am glad it lifed you spirit it lifed mine as well thank you again for the read and the comment.
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your lucky this is a beautiful poem filled with love and joy. you brought my spirits up with this and I thank you I did need some uplifting. thank you for sharing its beautiful and you chose your words so well!
best wishes
Sarah
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hey thanksforcommentingon oneof my poems.. it was awhile back.. sorry really slow...lol anyway ty
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