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A Lovely Flower

a lovely flower
sways in a delicate breeze
dancing gracefully

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Written May 20th, 2006

A contest entry

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  • myron silver member
    May 20, 2006
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    thanks for sharing your happy thoughts about this personified flower.

    best wishes in the contest,
    myron.
    Edited on May 24, 2:16 because ''.


  • Dreamy Green Eyes
    May 20, 2006
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    Beautiful!

    a lovely flower
    sways in a delicate breeze
    dancing gracefully


    PandaBaby... This is a beautiful haiku! I love the imagery in this piece... you have painted a wonderful image with your word choices... Thanks for sharing your wonderful talent. Best wishes in the contest! Debi