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I am the one for you

I am the one for you
I know in my heart its true
We are two halves of a whole
One truly blessed soul

I will help you fulfill your dreams
Till your love is bursting at the seams
I will do for you all a good wife should
Every little thing that I would

My heart belongs to you
You know that its true
Two halves of a whole are we
I know this you can see.

Author notes

just a work in progress just tell me what you think.
Written May 20th, 2006

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  • jkh
    May 21, 2006
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    Whenever I read your work I cant help but think its amazing. I love you so much and I am so lucky to have someone as amazing as you writing something this beautiful for me. I love you so much my sweet muse. Thank you.


  • Rivkah Lynn
    May 20, 2006
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    This is so beautiful. I love it and it is written well. Your fiance is lucky to be sharing his life with you. You both truely do make up a truely blessed soul. This is wonderful keep writing.

    Rivkah


  • Tweedle Dee
    May 20, 2006
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    Really really good! I hate saying good because good doesnt cover it, it was wonderful I can't think of another if I could I would say it. It was good, the title fits it very well. Great job and keep writing. ~olene~