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Undone

All i did was tell you my past
You said you loved me
I believed you so fast.

I have known words since i was young,
I know their strength,
yet still i have none.

For what you said cannot be unsung,
Your betrayals have left me,
Slightly undone.

I can forgive you for all i've been through,
I cannot forgive,
letting me fall in love with you.

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Written May 20th, 2006

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  • PixxieChick
    June 15, 2006
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    So sad...gorgeous last line though! Hope you're well! xx

  • Valkricry
    May 29, 2006
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    "I can forgive you for all i've been through,
    I cannot forgive,
    letting me fall in love with you." I absolutely love that. It is so pure and true.
    Hope you are well.
    Val


  • queen Moderators member
    May 22, 2006
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    Don't give up on love, you will find the right person. Being hurt by the one that is supposed to love you is a horrible pain. I hope you find all the happiness life has to offer