you were here
and now you aren't!
i cant stand
us apart!
you were here
when i needed you
you helped me
when i had the flu!
but then one day i got a call,
that you had died
and still to this day
my eyes haven't dried!
that's not fare
you were so young
we miss you more every day
we have words that are still unsung!
i never even got to say "bye"
not even "i love you"
that last thing i said was "see you later"
but i guess that is still true.
you in that car with 4 other people
you were the only one
that actually died
at 16 years old, your life shouldn't be done!
just remember i love you
and that's why i cry,
that's not fare
why were you the one to die?
Author notes
this is a poem i wrote about my first love jose. he was driveing on the way to my house and he was in the passanger seat. a drunk driver hit his car door. the parametic said he didnt die right away. they said he cried for a min before he died. and ryan, jacod, and tyler said they hurd him mumble one last thing. they said they hurd him say "stefaknee, remember i love you and i WILL see you soon". so to this day i havent drank any alcohol and i am totally agenst drunk driveing. PLEASE DONT DRINK AND DRIVE and no matter what anyone says it is better to listen and learn than to live and learn.
Written May 20th, 2006
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Wow. I know that it has got to be very hard to deal with such a suffering. The suddeness is what makes it hurt even more. I'm so sorry for your loss.
Safely hidden the darkness,
~ The Rocker who lost all aka Sacred Shadows
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that is so sad, im so sorry that u had to go through something like that... beautiful poem...
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i do not know what to say great write I am sorry you had to experince something so harsh. It is rough to loose some one you love. Things in life are not fair.
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Nice job!
awwwwww.....that's so sad. I'm so sorry. Man, you have gone through so much. I'm not kidding, if you ever need to talk about anything, just send me a message and I'll be there for you as much as I can be. I am so sorry for your loss and abuse.
Brittany -
aww thats well sad. im sorry bout ur loss hunni. I agree with u. people shouldnt drink n drive i kow people who died from it
wonderful poem hun good luck xx
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