Never thought I'd die for my sins
But through hell my journey now begins
This lonely night, delusions and pain
Driving my broken soul so insane
Don't say it's too late, too bad
Think of all the good times we had
Never let me go, just hold on tight
I promise to make everything alright.
Memories fade but the hurt is still the same
You think I'm playing but there's no room for games
I gave you my heart and you ran away
Now I'm waiting for you just one more day
I miss you, I need you, I love you
So stop this now and we'll make it through.
Your just too far away from me
I won't leave this love here to be
Forgotten, never forgotten, words are rotten
Just look at where we've gotten
False views, harsh tone in your voice
Please don't make this your lasting choice.
Never thought my sins were so wrong
Now your gone for way to long
Misused, mistreated, my bad, never knew
That old ties could be so blue
Too cold to carry on, too long
The best things now you just prolong
I love you, I need you, come home tonight
I promise to make everything alright.
Author notes
inspired by the song "far away" by nickelback.
Written May 20th, 2006
A contest entry
- come on in........ by tragediey-stricken.
305 points, ended May 26, 2006, 7 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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this is really good. i love that song and you did a great job showing what the songs means.
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wow! this is awesome!
