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One of a kind (Triple Triolet Chain)

 



Patricia is such an awesome friend
always there to comfort your pain
with words of hope that she has penned
Patricia is such an awesome friend

From heaven this angel did descend
to hand out love, a noble campaign
Patricia is such an awesome friend
always there to comfort your pain

Because she has such a wonderful soul
calming your nerves when they are harried
I write this poem for her in order to extol
Because she has such a wonderful soul

I love her so dearly, and truth be told
it’s such a shame she’s already married
Because she has such a wonderful soul
calming your nerves when they are harried

She sometimes seems too good to be true
but believe these words, she’s one of a kind
I’ve known her ever since her site debut
She sometimes seems too good to be true

With these finals words I say thank you
To a true LADY I was fortunate to find
She sometimes seems too good to be true
but believe these words, she’s one of a kind

Author notes

This was written for my dear friend pattyann4500.  With all my heart, I love this woman, and if she weren’t married, oh the trouble I’d get in to.  
Written May 20th, 2006

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  • pattyann4500
    May 22, 2006
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    Hey!!! CONGRATULATIONS TO YOU FOR SILVER!!!!!


  • Hope2MakeIt
    May 22, 2006
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    thank you for this entry into the contest for a sweet lady. i really appreciate the entry more than you know and i wish you the best of luck in this contest. hope2makeit


  • galfalfa gold member
    May 21, 2006
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    How lucky is Patty to have you so smitten with her John - a very lovely heartfelt tribute that any woman would love to have bestowed upon her - bravo on this!
    Edited on May 21, 7:37 because 'spelling as always....'.


  • FloridaGatorQueen silver member
    May 20, 2006
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    This is such a beautiful tribute to a nice lady. Patty is one good soul among many. Keep up the awesome poetry!!!


  • Ariosto II. gold member
    May 20, 2006
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    I had to look this one up in the book!
    Beautifuly crafted and sincere.
    I hope Patricia likes it
    I hope you win
    1500 points is quite a haul!
    D


  • Child of an Angel
    May 20, 2006
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    hahahah trouble youd get in to hehehe..... Great write, you have a talent at tribute poems, I might have to do one for you now, hmm what to say.....But i loved this because it pours out the care and love you have for her, and how special she truly is to many. Keep penning and I will keep reading!!!!

    Love
    Emily


  • wings of an angel
    May 20, 2006
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    This is a nice poem John that you had done for your friend Patricia I am sure she appreciates this lovely write you had done for her good luck in the contest sounds golden to me


  • misticmoonlite gold member
    May 20, 2006
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    this is so cute, but hey she is a very nice choice to write about, such a lovely lady..thank you for sharing and good luck in the contest..Linda

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