The layers of my soul unfold
Blooming like a poisonous flower
As a toxic waste
Seeps out of the leaflets my mind
And emotion combusts upon me
Creating a world so tragic
And I am lost in realm of impossibility
Where the world crashes upon
And in the stormiest nights
Blood rains down upon me
Drenching me in the sorrow of millions
Which live across the land
And In my realm of impossibility
I am as vulnerable as can be
With my hands tied behind my back
And knife held at my neck
A metaphorical gun held to my head
And a situation which has no answer.
Author notes
bad night i had a slight well emotional breakdown
Written May 19th, 2006
A contest entry
- darkest emotion by dancing darkness.
300 points, ended May 30, 2006, 54 entries
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this is so emotional..it leaks darkness...so emotional..the word choice and imagery was amzing...i'm sorry you feel this way if you ever need to talk i'm here thats why i held this contest..
"A metaphorical gun held to my head
And a situation which has no answer."
those lines were so powerful silent but strong...thank you for entering....x
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