peace,
love,
in harmony,
forever
we will stand together and raise our voices
we want to live in a world full of love,
peace,
equality,
and in hope for a brighter future
a world with no wars,
no fight,
no hatred,
no pain
a place where everyone is equal
a land far away from our society
we stand together and fight for our rights
the right to be happy and to reign together in peace and equality
Author notes
blow
A contest entry
- image- 8 by Cat.
400 points, ended May 22, 2006, 8 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - BLOW (repaired) by Kali-Mus.
600 points, ended March 2, 2008, 5 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What did you think
Comments
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Wonderfully creative. I truly enjoyed the freedom of this piece. The expressions are done with a unique pen. If only all of society held your beautiful insight, we would live in a much BETTER world!! GREat work!
Melanie
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This poem is a little bit generic.
& please do not forget to put BLOW
in the authors notes section to show compliance
with the rules.
Thank You. -
Some great thoughts here, with a feel of what the 60's meant to alot of people across the Western world.. you said it with an easy vibe and you thought about the subject trying to stay clear of cliche, so well done
many thanks for entering our contest..
well done and good luck
~GILL~x -
This really captures what the hippies were standing for- what their ideals were. I think they lost along the way- i think they misplaced their ideals in a sea of pot and acid- i think they took their ideals out on the wrong people.. but originally this was their plan- and you captured it
perfectly.
thank you for penning this for the contest. '
m
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