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Hive Mind

I know a guy whose
brain's like a bee hive - lot's of
things buzzing 'round inside

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Written May 19th, 2006

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  • May 27, 2006
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    Love it! That made me laugh! Very well done! Tink


  • Dreamy Green Eyes
    May 20, 2006
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    Nice job!

    I know a guy whose
    brain's like a bee hive - lot's of
    things buzzing 'round inside

    I like this! Good job! Thanks for sharing your wonderful talent! Best wishes in the contest! Debi