A Godly Woman Named Beka by Sharcu at All poetry

Rebekah Rankin was her name
But then Beka Kryger she became
For a Godly man came along
Their love was so very strong

Beka is a friend to those in need
For by God’s grace she has been freed
She always knows just what to say
To be the one to make your day

A stay-at-home mom, Beka is
Helping her kids study for the quiz
Bobby and Baby must be really great
For their parents are leading them straight

What more can I say about this woman?
She is apart of God’s amazing plan
Spreading His word across the land
For the truth in Him will always stand

Author notes

Poem written for Beka. Check out her poetry!
allpoetry.com/poets/Mamabekaboo

Picture was designed by myself for her. I used Photoshop CS to design it.

Background for her as well. It reminds me of the beauty that is in her heart. I don't write much rhyming poetry, but these words came out so I figured I'd post it on here.
Written May 19th, 2006

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A contest entry

Just for me!! by Mamabekaboo. 307 points, ended May 26, 2006, 3 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest

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RevHead
July 23, 2006
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That was sooo sweet of you to write that for her!!! it mented my heart... (there are still some nice guys out there! there is hope!! lol) um you wrote this really well, i really liked it! NMNM
Mamabekaboo
May 26, 2006
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Wow the picture above is SOOOOOOOO Cool. Thanks so much for entering this contest. I knew you could bring me something beautiful. Thanks so much. I would love to be able to use this on my authors page if that is ok with you. Because He Lives, Beka
speckeledpharie
May 22, 2006
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I love the rhyme meter of this poem. It is very kind when people write nice things about others. keep up the good work!
Salt Walker
May 20, 2006
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this is so cute it made me go Awwwwwwww wheni read it. u are such a great writer, i could only wish that i am half as good as writer as you. you amaze me really
^Xerox^
Pensively Ignorant
May 19, 2006
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It's just as touching as when you first read it to me. I do love the flow of this one, and how it rhymed. Sometimes it just comes out, you know? Well I'm sure you do since you said so.. anyways! Off topic. This was very moving, I'm sure she'll appreciate it and I know she must be a great friend. Lovely background and picture, yet another beautiful flower. I love the dew.. *sighs romantically*

*God Bless*

Sarah
Molassis
May 19, 2006
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Lil brother Sharcu... this is absolutely LOVELY and very touching... you have captured the beauty that I see in her! That rose picture is absolutely amazing as well.. my my you have outdone yourself with this!!! Wonderful! God bless you sweetie! ~Melissa
lillmissunshine
May 19, 2006
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hey Tim this is awesome!!! great job, you rymed so well....it went together perectly Awesome as always kepp on doing what you do best....encouraging people with your poems
kimberly
OnlyInMyDreams
May 19, 2006
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This is really good tim!
Mamabekaboo
May 19, 2006
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My Daughter said she wants to give you a point for that LOL.
Beka
Mamabekaboo
May 19, 2006
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WOWOWOWOWOW This is awesome!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I love ROSES!!!
This is sooo cool. Love this better than the other pic. Thanks.
Because He Lives,
Beka
FireyAura
May 19, 2006
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Tim, this is really beautiful. I love this. I alos loved how you rhymed it, yet it seemed to flow and it wasn't forced. Very nicly written. I also LOVE the background. It indeed is very beautiful. Well, awesome job!

~*Chelsea*~
Mamabekaboo
May 19, 2006
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Awwww this is sooo beautiful. Thanks!!! I reallllllly love this. Thanks so much for writing it. I might even have you change the names back like you said. You did a great job for not usually rhyming too. Thanks for entering,
Because He Lives,
Beka