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Jim

I knew him for his yellow cat,
Or perhaps this was his Hare
either way, twas a lovely cat
Snow White he Was! I remember now_

I loved him for his gentle soul
the Jim inspired art
and In Him there sorrow
and it made me know his heart

I kept him for his loyalty
for I could not trust my own
never would he allow me to stray
never, because of him, would my lovely lips roam

And in the months I knew him
I would call him Jim
and in the night I would think
What a wonderful boy, my darling, my friend.

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Written May 19th, 2006

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  • Exit-Stage-Right
    May 23, 2006
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    Jim is a nice name!

  • 2Dead2Live
    May 19, 2006
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    Yeps

    Sorry i fucked up that frist line real good and nice, i meant to say maybe you arent to sure.
    God damn i can type.

  • 2Dead2Live
    May 19, 2006
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    What ever makes you happy

    Jaz I really like this, it is a good peice,to me it kinda sounds like you are maybe to sure who you wont to be in a realitionship with, but i could be very wrong, i could just be a friend that you attracted, or i could be wrong on that to,
    Well fuck it, its not any of my business anyways, well great write. Keep on keeping on