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My Eternity~~~

Missing image
In the soft lit moonlight
My thoughts drift in rewind
With memories insight
Sharing moments divine

While I'm dreaming there
Til' the twilight of day
A peace fills my soul where
All troubles float away

Echoing in my ears
Are hymns of joyous praise
Those dreams so crystal clear
Are from the stars we gaze

And you're my gift on high
Because you're pure at heart
Please never say goodbye
And pray we never part

Those echoes are from songs
Filling us with God's grace
And we'll carry along
In this poetic place

 I will always love you
Inscribed tenderly
For you know, my heart's true
And you're each breath I breathe

Author notes

Thanks for reading us as we, much love, Timothy~
Written May 19th, 2006

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  • Heavenly Angel silver member
    May 24, 2006
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    Timothy and I thank you very much!

  • strad
    May 24, 2006
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    awwwwwwee~~~~~~~~~~~~~~


  • Heavenly Angel silver member
    May 21, 2006
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    Timothy and I thank you very much!


  • luckynsincere
    May 21, 2006
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    Oh.. you guys, this is beautiful. I loved it! The ending was superb... each breath I breathe, now that shows love and passion! Thank you for sharing this.. It is incredible to say the very least
    Melanie


  • Heavenly Angel silver member
    May 21, 2006
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    Timothy and I thank you!!!!


  • Heavenly Angel silver member
    May 21, 2006
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    Thank you so much!
    ~Timothy and Sandy~


  • Heavenly Angel silver member
    May 21, 2006
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    Timothy and I thank you very much and appreciate you!
    Timothy and Sandy


  • Heavenly Angel silver member
    May 21, 2006
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    Timothy and I thank you very much!!


  • Heavenly Angel silver member
    May 21, 2006
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    Timothy and I thank you so much!


  • smiley
    May 21, 2006
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    such a beautiful piece... love the prayer within it...

    Yvonne


  • Roadkill Crisis
    May 21, 2006
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    whoa dude this is indredible, i especially like the stanza:
    While I'm dreaming there
    Til' the twilight of day
    A peace fills my soul where
    All troubles float away

    but this whole thing was awe-inspiring, i actually feel this emptiness inside, this poem makes me long for the love it describes, i really felt it in my heart, deep down. its inpossible 2 critisize u, ur poetry is too brilliant...


  • Sharon Corr gold member
    May 21, 2006
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    Brilliance True Gold in Heart & Soul!

    Dearest Poeticweaver & Wandering Angel~
    Beautifully Penned.
    A heavenly duet.
    From two masterful poets,
    Seamless.. And Pure Magic..
    Just breathe… In your masterpiece.
    I am looking forward to being inside this beautiful place with both of you, and reading all you do! Best of luck in the contest. Ditto poeticpieces, nobody says it better! I second his motion and loving devotion. All the best, your friend forever Sharon ~


  • DarkenedDreams
    May 21, 2006
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    This is a really sweet poem.... I love it.... I wish that I can writee like you.... it is really beautiful piece...it makes me think of people that have shown their love to me and the same for me..... keep on writing.....b/c I am willing to read you poems

    DarkenedDreams


  • irene plunkett
    May 21, 2006
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    this is a beautiful written piece


  • Heavenly Angel silver member
    May 20, 2006
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    We thank yous o very much!
    Timothy and Sandy


  • Wandika gold member
    May 20, 2006
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    A very wonderful love poem my friends.
    Very nice indeed.

    Jim


  • Heavenly Angel silver member
    May 20, 2006
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    Timothy and I thank you very much!

  • Sunshinegf
    May 20, 2006
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    AWESOME WORK ON THIS


  • Heavenly Angel silver member
    May 20, 2006
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    Thank you very much! Timothy and I appreciate you!


  • Heavenly Angel silver member
    May 20, 2006
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    Thank you, sweetheart!


  • poeticpieces
    May 20, 2006
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    POWERFUL!

    Excellent Love Poem, Seems To Me, Whatever You Put Your Hands To, You Weave Beauty Through Each Line Divine, Touching So Many, Sharing The Indepth Love You Have Within You, Great Job, And Hats Off Also To Sandy, Keep Up The Wonderful, Poetic Piece...Love To You, Awesome Job Daddio~

    Your Son, lil Tim


  • Yazhi
    May 20, 2006
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    Beautiful poem with so much love and devotion. I think your dreams for the both of you have been fulfilled. God bless you both! I wish you well in this contest!
    Yazhi


  • Heavenly Angel silver member
    May 20, 2006
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    We thank you so very much!


  • Painful Expressions
    May 20, 2006
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    Excellent

    WOW this is such a wonderful piece. Very well written with alot of feeling and emotion.


  • Heavenly Angel silver member
    May 20, 2006
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    We thank you so much!


  • Heavenly Angel silver member
    May 20, 2006
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    Timothy and I thank you so much!


  • Heavenly Angel silver member
    May 19, 2006
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    Timothy and I thank you so much for such a sweet comment!


  • Novfirithwenx
    May 19, 2006
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    absolutely gorgeous..

    <3


  • freestylerway
    May 19, 2006
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    full of love...thats great. i love it .its so pure and simple.good job


  • Rev Alimae gold member
    May 19, 2006
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    Genius!

    Timothy and Sandy,

    What can I say that has not already been said about this piece?
    It is a true work of art that shows the true mark of a Bravura collaboration!

    Rarely does one find two masters whom can even work together let alone not argue the points of a literary catenation, yet the two of you have done just that; interwoven in a dance that is as sensual as the subject of your belletristic work.

    The form is perfect with not a flaw and the meter flows seamlessly. One does not even stop to think that they are actually reading a bunch of words for they are transported to a higher plane of existence as they watch the scenes unfold before their eyes.

    This dithyramb is a piece which will be around for century's to come and many will walk away with a feeling of joy and peace.

    It is my opinion that the two of you have created a masterpiece.

    Thank you from the bottom of my poetic heart for letting us read this and for collaborating to catenate this beautiful piece of art.

    Rev. Alimae


  • Heavenly Angel silver member
    May 19, 2006
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    We very much appreciate you!
    Timothy and Sandy


  • Heavenly Angel silver member
    May 19, 2006
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    Timothy and I thank you very much


  • Heavenly Angel silver member
    May 19, 2006
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    Timothy and I thank you very much!


  • Heavenly Angel silver member
    May 19, 2006
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    Awwww thank you so much!


  • Heavenly Angel silver member
    May 19, 2006
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    Timothy and i thank you for reading our work!


  • Heavenly Angel silver member
    May 19, 2006
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    Thank you so very much!
    Timothy and Sandy


  • Heavenly Angel silver member
    May 19, 2006
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    Thank you so very much!


  • Heavenly Angel silver member
    May 19, 2006
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    Timothy and I thank you so much for stopping by to read our piece!


  • Heavenly Angel silver member
    May 19, 2006
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    We thank you
    Timothy and Sandy


  • Heavenly Angel silver member
    May 19, 2006
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    We're very happy you enjoyed our poem! Thank you so much!
    Timothy and Sandy


  • Heavenly Angel silver member
    May 19, 2006
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    Thank you; we appreciate your comment!
    Timothy and Sandy


  • Heavenly Angel silver member
    May 19, 2006
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    Thank you so very much!
    Timothy and Sandy


  • Heavenly Angel silver member
    May 19, 2006
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    Timothy and I thank you very much!


  • Heavenly Angel silver member
    May 19, 2006
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    We so appreciate you!
    Timothy and Sandy


  • Mark Rickerby gold member
    May 19, 2006
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    Hi Sandy,

    I didn't realize last time I read this that it was a duet. Sorry about that. Again, great job! (Both of you.)

    Mark


  • Heavenly Angel silver member
    May 19, 2006
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    Thank you!

    Timothy and Sandy


  • Heavenly Angel silver member
    May 19, 2006
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    Thank you for your sweet comment; Timothy and I appreciate you!


  • Heavenly Angel silver member
    May 19, 2006
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    Thank you so much!

    Timothy and Sandy


  • Heavenly Angel silver member
    May 19, 2006
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    Thank you!
    Timothy and Sandy


  • Heavenly Angel silver member
    May 19, 2006
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    Timothy and I thank you very much!


  • Heavenly Angel silver member
    May 19, 2006
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    Awwwwwwwwww thank you!
    We appreciate you!
    Timothy and Sandy


  • Heavenly Angel silver member
    May 19, 2006
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    Lynda, thank you so much! We appreciate you!
    Timothy and Sandy


  • Heavenly Angel silver member
    May 19, 2006
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    Thank you so much!
    Timothy and Sandy


  • Heavenly Angel silver member
    May 19, 2006
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    Timothy and I thank you very much!

  • Poetryintheblood gold member
    May 19, 2006
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    A most beautiful collaboration, depicts the picture just perfectly, Thank you and good luck in my contest Josephine


  • Heavenly Angel silver member
    May 19, 2006
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    Thank you!!
    Timothy and Sandy


  • Heavenly Angel silver member
    May 19, 2006
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    Thank you so much!
    Timothy and Sandy


  • Heavenly Angel silver member
    May 19, 2006
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    We appreciate you so much!
    Timothy and Sandy


  • Heavenly Angel silver member
    May 19, 2006
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    Thank you for reading us!
    Timothy and Sandy


  • lavi sky rogue
    May 19, 2006
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    This is extraordinary! The picture, the splendid lines, the idea behind the words, I don't know what I liked more, but this poem is a true work of art! Gorgeous all the way! The last stanza touched me deeply, it is the strongest in the poem. Congrats and thanks for making my day better with this work!


  • Owlfire
    May 19, 2006
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    The last line really got me in this poem. It is a happy and tender write, but that last line is just gorgeous!

  • meaningfull
    May 19, 2006
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    Beautiful work and picture! Nice flow !

  • darrylblacksr
    May 19, 2006
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    amazing

    Amazing, truly an awesome write about love. thanks for sharing such words...

  • Home Of Pumpkin
    May 19, 2006
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    this is fantastic! such a beautiful picture and a poem to match an amazing rhym scheme its very hard to keep up a high standard with a poem like this and not make the rhyms sound fourced but this is great lovely lovely ^-^ welldone really enjoyable


  • poet2angels gold member
    May 19, 2006
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    awwwww, this is so beautiful by two of my favorite poets
    Your ink blends lovely
    hope to see more from this brother and sis duo♥
    Lynda

  • Mark Rickerby gold member
    May 19, 2006
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    Nicely done, Timothy. It's amazing how much a picture can inspire. You nailed it.

    Hope all is well,

    Mark


  • poeticweaver gold member
    May 19, 2006
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    Thanks so much for your loving and indepth comment, much love to you and yours! -Timothy & Sandy~


  • Loveandblessings2u gold member
    May 19, 2006
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    oh my this is so far beyond beautiful, just truly amazing, down right outstanding. i love you touching and loving poem. this is full of true love, that made you want to live a moment all over, now that's what i call love. this is a very wonderful write. thanks for sharing. joyce


  • dutch2lips gold member
    May 19, 2006
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    A loving write!


  • Bri Class of 2009
    May 19, 2006
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    amazing

    amazing peom so true about love keep up the great writting <333


  • gullionmar
    May 19, 2006
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    very lovely writing kept my attention till the end keepup the great writing


  • magicalprincess
    May 19, 2006
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    Once again, this is love at it's best, beautiful you two~

  • hazydreams
    May 19, 2006
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    Beautiful

    Beautiful written love the poem and love the words. Kinda sad.Best of luck to you in the contest and best of wishes to you in all you do.


  • poeticweaver gold member
    May 19, 2006
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    Thanks for all the wonderful comments!

    -Timothy & Sandy~


  • May 19, 2006
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    pure, soft and tender.you do know how to select words.i like it.


  • StarEyes
    May 19, 2006
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    A tender peice

    This is an INCREDIBLE peice! I love the tenderness, and the softness that you carry through out this entire peice. It is beautifully written! Keep it up!


  • SuZyCuE
    May 19, 2006
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    Wow the imagery in this poems makes it so beautiful like a warm summer day, love is beautiful enough but the way you have penned it love remains outstanding. Great job on this Im glad I stopped by to read it.
    Suzanne

  • mine ever lastting
    May 19, 2006
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    beautiful poem i loved it god bless

  • Maryangel
    May 19, 2006
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    Excellent Piece

    Excellent work , make me think so much, memories and thoughts come to mind, I know you have written many good ones byt yet this is a fresh tastefull piece by you, no wonder you are one of my favorite authors. Keep on the good work!


  • poeticweaver gold member
    May 19, 2006
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    Thanks for your beautiful comment, Timothy and Sandy~


  • WulfDiamondLou33
    May 19, 2006
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    wow. this is like really good. i keep reading this part :Echoing in my ears
    Are hymns of joyous praise
    Those dreams so crystal clear
    Are from the stars we gaze






    I mean wow.

    Love Diamond

  • Vidia Fvae Xeiden
    May 19, 2006
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    very good

    Soft and sweet, all the lighter sides of love.


  • lady8
    May 19, 2006
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    That was beautiful! Makes a girl want to run out and fall in love!! Tenderly touching with words that make the heart sigh!!

  • jp9997
    May 19, 2006
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    To be honest I can personally relate to what's written here. Well, what I mean is i can take a lot from it and put it to an experience of my own. It's a very tranquil piece and one i'm sure a lot of other people will both enjoy and relate to


  • poeticweaver gold member
    May 19, 2006
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    Thanks so much, Timothy and Sandy~


  • xDemonicxAngelx
    May 19, 2006
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    Wow! Just beautiful! Brilliant!, I loved it! So beautifully written and amazing imagery.. Awesome job, keep up the great work! ♥


  • poeticweaver gold member
    May 19, 2006
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    Thanks sweet soul, love yas and all your support!

  • turtle toast
    May 19, 2006
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    FLIPPEN SWEET!!!!

    wow freacking amazing amazing flow amazing rythming amazing amazings lol great poem


  • Hope2MakeIt
    May 19, 2006
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    another great write from the two of you. thank you for always bringing such sweetness to love. i wish you the best of luck in this contest that you have entered though i do not think you will be needing it. hope2makeit

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