I see the sunset
eclipsed by three birds in flight
in dreamy green eyes.
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Author notes
had to make use of the name.... shameless, I know.
Written May 19th, 2006
A contest entry
- Haiku Contest (Results being corrected-- This contest is closed. ) by Dreamy Green Eyes.
300 points, ended May 27, 2006, 38 entries
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this is an awesome write with great imagery..keep up the good work.
ranjani
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dear barefoot,
this is such a majestic poem.
it makes me speechless.
so full of grace.
so peaceful.
marion -
This is delicious. beautiful image cought in a lovers eyes. It made me smile. a lovely haiku. I love the birds eclipsing the sunset. a wonderful image.
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naughty but very nice, lovely word picture, Good luck
Dixie -
Wonderful!
I see the sunset
eclipsed by three birds in flight
in dreamy green eyes.
Well, I must admit that I am a bit partial to this one..
Nice job on this haiku! Thanks for the little tribute... I appreciate the thoughtfulness... Thanks for sharing! Best wishes in the contest! Debi
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Lovely, albeit a bit shameless...
Well done, my Friend...Good luck in the contest...Be well, Poet... Wanda
Edited on May 19, 2:18 because ''.
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