It was a cold dark night, when I saw his
celestial light brown eyes.I didn't know which
way to turn, his hands caressed me and got me burned.
He became my friend and then my lover, his
wings gave me refugee until it was over.
How does one dry the tears of an Angel,
who doesn't deserve to be rotten, by a mortal
that barely knows how to live, day by day without
been forgotten.That has no control on it's destiny,
that just survives with a poor spirit, with a pray
that caries him when it has fallen.
My Angel gave my love, more than I could have
imagined in my dreams, on my remote infernal
thoughts. I wasn't worthy of that tenderness,
I ruined it, destroyed it all. I will be there
till the end, that's what my Angel said, but I
couldn't bare to see his pain and like a coward
I ran away.
I have torn my heart to pieces trying to do
a good cause for another and on the way I
closed my eyes, shamefully I know it,taking
from my loving Angel a thorn with no control
of it, I know it. I will die thinking of him
and all it could have been. Maybe we'll be
together again even if it's in my dreams.
If I was to leave this world, I would want to be
in his grace full arms,feeling his tender lips
kissing my fleshy naked skin, what an eternal
bliss, I don't want another.Waking up in his
white open wings, to live forever with my
unique Anarchy King.
I do hope, someday my Angel forgives me, for all the
sin I did commit. I do feel the tears on my face running,
even thou they come out of blood. I don't wanna loose my
Angel but I can't undo what I have done, even if
I'll be thinking of him always from dusk till dawn.
Author notes
I dedicate this to you my Angel, where ever you are, and who ever you're with, I will never find someone like you couse for me you were it.
Written May 18th, 2006
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I only wish that you had been talking about me Mari. I miss you and never wanted to be away from you. If only I could talk to you again... I'd come to you. Plane, train, car, boat, or by foot... I'd come running. I love you Juliet... and always will.
Aunque nunca te he conocido en persona... siempre te amare. Y espero que un dia regresaras a ser mia.
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I love you mami, and forever ill be your Anarcgy king, words that come out of me is because of anger understand me please..but my words the words that make a smile on your face will be reserved for you only..i love you with all my heart my "chubby princees" and for ever even though you get mad and say things, i will never leave your side..like in matrimoy, "until death do us apart"
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wow. this was a good one i loved this part:If I was to leave this world, I would want to be
in his grace full arms,feeling his tender lips
kissing my fleshy naked skin, what an eternal
bliss, I don't want another.Waking up in his
white open wings, to live forever with my
unique Anarchy King.
Its AMAZING. i really do love it. keep up the good work -
Correct me if i'm wrong, but there appears to be a lot of love, yet a lot of guilt and regret in this piece. I think all three things are very powerful and give your poem a certain sense of strength. I really liked it
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this is really beautifull. i am left with no words to say. you shouldn't change anything in this poem at all. keep it up!!
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Thank you, for the lovely comment SpamWitch.
att. Maryangel -
This seems so sad, but also very beautiful. You write of your angel as if he were just that..an angel. Such descriptions that you pose here are brilliant. I hope you get your angel back.
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