Standing in the darkness, my
Time fading fast. Fears
Invade the heart, just
Like in the past. The
Longings grow ever stronger, for a
Love from deep within. A soul left
Open, closed to darkness once again.
Venom seeps through veins, to
Infiltrate this heart of mine.
Never quite sure where I am
Going every time. And each day awake,
Yearnings bright and new. I can't
Obscure the feelings,
Understand, I'm still loving you.
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Written May 18th, 2006
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I love your imagery...your word choice. Kept my heart captivated through out the read. The title fits the poem perfectly!! Great write!
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Thanks for the comliment, and the comment
Storm -
drop like its hot
damn girl, i feel you. you can write. i luv it, i luv it. i luv -
Thank you, appreciate your comments
Storm -
wow great poem it was full of emotion i really enjoyed reading it keep up the great work this was a wonderful poem
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Thanks sweetie, appreciate it.
Storm -
Damn, Storm. This is deep and very heart rending wiht longing. Another excellent work, swety.
I am here if ya need to talk. K?
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Thanks hun, appreciate your comments
Storm -
such a longing storm, powerfull write this lady!
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Thanks Val. I may need that ear yet. I appreciate it.
Storm -
Eeek, I could almost snag this as a theme write. I feel for you hun, I really do. Again, I am here if you need to talk. You know how to get me. My ♥ on Valk's wings.
~Val
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