Two lovers lie entwined
No sheet covering them
Wearing only moonlight
She lays awake dream up dreams
While living up other's dreams
Dreaming of escape and freedom
Longing to go back to simpler thing
Times with no emotions involved
Wishing it was only him not her
Making it easy to walk away
Going places she hasn't been
Leaving him behind in the past
Never coming back for her heart
Author notes
this was inspired by a U2 song called "Electrical Storm" any direct quotes are unintentional
Written May 18th, 2006
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I really enjoyed reading this. Short but well writtn. keep writing
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"leaves an echo of a haunting sob running through your heart" great line - it sounds like a line from a poem (it could be and i'm just showing my ignorance)..thanks for the review...
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loved the beginning think maybe it could ave been developed more but classy writing an leaves an echoe of a haunting sob running through your heart
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